Tuesday, 20 August 2013

Round Four Crit

I managed to do an oblique perspective drawing of my completed idea for the shop/house. Most of the furniture are multifunction where I had a couch that would fold out to be a bed, a TV cupboard, a shower bath and a bed which folds up and becomes a workspace for the living person.

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At first they thought the gashapon machines were washing machines, those bastards people.
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The sectional drawing didn't show the information I intended to portray, making it a weak drawing.

The feedback that I was given was that I needed people to represent what was happening inside the house and shop as well as captions/annotations to show the functions of the house. The house had a wall in the middle of the shop and house where it can be slided to make the shop bigger during the day and the room bigger during night. An idea that was suggested was to completely open the shop to the public and have a row of gashapon machines on the wall where during the day, the user can completely push out the wall to have the whole area for living. The wall then becomes a shop at night for people that walk by the shop.

General feedback that was given was that the entrance into the shop/house was also important that also needed to be considered.

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